Reflection on my pitch

Are there any areas of the presentation you would like to give any more detail on?

Creativity
The idea had to be described in detail on more in detail of why the structure of the story was organised in that specific way. and how each of the scene in the music video link up and how there would have effected and related back to the audience.
Practicality

The schedules that i was about to shoot was put in a specific way as the gym scene was meant to be shot first as this was because it was meant to get a feel of trading for something then the next scene was the boxing fight as it was to have the energy of the final towards the end of the song.

Technicality

What i would go in more i depth is how i would use the stabiliser for the camera, as why and how i would use the stabiliser in the fight scene of the music video, would allow to re create a fight scene from creed. Why i would use it is to create a smoother shot of the camera when tracked around and also to create an effect that the audience is there in the boxing ring.

Music video theory 

The performance side of the music video was the section i wanted to talk about more it was to tell the audiance why it has specific elements is the performance as why it was meant to be black and white themed and how it would have related to the idea of the music video, but it was later covered in the Q and A. 

What did your audience identify as the strengths of your music video idea?

Creativity

The strength to my idea that the audience identifed was the link of the song lyrics and i was keeping the link of the song of working hard and grinding influenced it on my music video idea as i bring it back to the concept of the song and identity of the song.

Practicality

The Strength was that it was possible to this music video as it wasn't hard. As the location that i was going to uses still hard back up of other locations as the peakcock gym needed permission it could have been replaced by a other location such a barking abbey gym.

Technicality

Was with the equipment that i was going to shoot the music video in was a strength i was going to shoot with a canon 1200D as it was a camera that i could have adjusted to the rights exposure and right depth of field. and making it look more then $99.

Music video theory 

The streagth was the performance of how i was going to show the performance and his wealth, as i had a set date for the audi rs3 to show the artist wealth and this was fingured out to show the most out of the artist star persona.

What did your audience identify as the areas for your improvement?

Creativity

The improvements that i identified that was in my idea is there wanted a simpler story as the   story whole way through did not relate which told be the story was to complex and was needed to be improved on to be made understandable for the target audience which the music video is amid at.

Practicality

I was also pointed out that the location were not connecting such as the bowling ally at the beginning as then the boxing ring at the end of the music video, and also i would also need to get a lots of permission from as this may take long as the time period is quiet short to film. 

Technicality

The tchnicality side i was not been giving a clear improvement on , but was i could identify is the camera stabiliser was mainly to be used on the fight scene as it take time to set up the stabiliser i may need to improve the options of what t use for the fight scene.

Music video theory 

I had a theory of making artist in the performance part of the section relate to a news paper as this was pointed out to have improvements on because it was not recognisable to the target audience i was aiming to produce the music video for.

What changes will you make to your music video concept based on the feedback you received?

Creativity
The changes that i would have on my idea is the narrative as i found out there was a lot going on in the idea which was seem to be confusing and was a bit to ambitious. what i would change is the props i would take out the mask to keep it simple and more effective, and then i would also change the begging of the narrative because it did relate to the boxing  so i would change it to a karate kid type of story line.

Practicality

The changes that i would have is the location where the music video would have been shoot as it was a lots of location that you need permission for and where not connecting as the performance part of the video was set in one location as from the feedback i could have had it in multiple different location such as southend and to emphasis of the artist growing stronger and moving on.

Technicality

The changes that i would have made on the equipment is the editing programme that i would have edited on as it was first final cut pro express i would have changed to final cut pro x  as this is available on my macbook pro, as this programme contains a lot more feature that could help make the music video aesthicalily pleasing

Music video theory 

What i would change is the way i show star persona in the music video, i would emphasis the artist more through out the music video as the mask would me removed and we would seen the artist as a fighter, humble and authoritative which would make the artist more understandable for the audience.